Thank you very much for posting this competition. It was a lot of fun to work on.
I have made a few small changes to enhance your floor plan. The shapes and sizes of the bedrooms stayed approximately the same. I think the rooms have a better space optimizarion with the new floor plan.
In the entry space I added a tall mirror and a shelf to store the essentials (keys, wallet, bag, etc.) when walking in and out the front door. I wanted to keep this space connected to the open living and dining area.
I remodeled the bathroom next to the kitchen. In the current floor plan this bathroom can be used as a powder room for guest, since both the toilet and the shower are hidden behind a glass door.
The kitchen was very compressed before (the minimum distances between the counters weren't enough), so I added a little more space to it. It has a hull height, full lenght folding door (see on render) , so you can decide weather you would like to separate it from the living area or maybe have a fully open space.
I hope I designed something of your liking. Let me know if you want me to work further on the project, or would like to know the material and furniture selection.
